The sounds are really good, I did like the melodies a lot as well. It would be a fantastic loop for a video game if you were to edit it to loop perfectly. I think it's a tad repetitive, but not by much. Also, the pitch change or key change or whatever the hell you want to call it at 0:52 sounded bad. (to me at least, this is only one opinion) overall 4/5 Oh and BTW, what vst/samples did you use for those sounds?

Wow, good beat all the way through, I love the energetic feel to it. I feel like it could've used more "bass" but it's still really good. Also, good use of FX too. I feel it would be good for a fast-paced video game.

Very nice! The kick was very present, but not overpowering, the bass rippled and morhped epicly and I loved all of the sounds you used! And, as far as I cant tell anyways, the mix was pretty good(don't take my word for it though, im just a beginnner myself). The vocals were good, the did seem off at times, but were very strong throughout the whole song. I also liked the lyrics :) overall 4.5/5